Very nice work, you are improving a great deal.
The neck looks a lot better.
I took the liberty to alter a couple of your works slightly just to try and help you see some of your mistakes.
It may be more the way you are not drawing the proper wrinkles in the clothing and it makes the arms and legs out of porportion, but even ignoring that, you are still having problems with the ratio between the arms and the legs. Even with Asian short thighs aside you are still drawing the legs way too short.
I love the man on the horse, You do not see that angle drawn that often... the horse is very nice and the upper body is in perpotion to the horse, but the without the showing where the knees are and the angle the feet are at makes the legs look shorter then the arms.
The arm holding the bow is just wrong, I can not figure out where it is supposed to be bending,
I suggest that you look at manga and comic book forshortening and try to use some of their exagerated tricks. Draw the body before putting on the cloths so that you have the anatamy correct.
Also when all else fails and you do not have a model, look at yourself in the mirror.
Sorry my lines are not better, I am not good at drawing with a mouse.
Edited by kaiselin, 09 February 2009 - 07:11 PM.